typography and mark don't match in style. Blackletter is gothic and associated to vampires and heavy metal and your mark is elegant with swirls. I would go with a simplier typeface maybe smallcaps serif or sanserif. Hope that helps.
two things - First, you've slanted or italicized your type but not the mark. They look like two different logos. Second, the mark in the samples don't match the ones that are knocked out of the boxes. They are too big. flip through them to see what I mean. Hope that helps.
Thanks fish, I've always noticed the lines of a drawing, image, car, or whatever before anything else and when teaching myself how to draw I really concetrated on the line and mimicing them, then the shading. it's almost like looking at everything in black and white, then gray then color.
But nope ALLL MAN HERE. lmao..
Thanks MD I'm always open to suggestions. I was origonally going to do a script type but my tablet is on the fritz and using a mouse to recreate a drawn script type is way to time consuming. I wanted the image to be kinda sexy/stylish but the type giving it bold sorta feel while still compliminting the image somehow. I'll work on another version since my pen just needed batteries.?lol
coy, I've told this time n again, you rock at doing this swishy designs... this one is brilliant!
P.S. I actually thought you were a gal based on how well you do these swishes :)
Nice one Coy, I think a variation with a reflection would be nice, showing arrows going both ways to convey that motion you've got going - maybe put the black and white ones together in a variation to show both. Really cool!
Big fan of the blue