jrwahyu`s Logo Designs Comments


Comment No.
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sovisual
Feb 14, 2010 14:21

I agree with geengles. if you want people to be inspired to connect with each other you need to show that its fun to do so. more substance with this one is needed. like the colors though.

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Comment No.
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mr.Geengles
Feb 12, 2010 11:52

1. the type is unreadable
2. the bug looks to me like an alien
3. seems like the poor bug is having a hard time... make it's face less suffering...

good luck!

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Comment No.
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jrwahyu
Feb 12, 2010 11:27

Guys, would you give me critique... I never understand why my logo not approved.

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Comment No.
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muse7
Aug 31, 2009 21:09

I see a rubix cube and the head of a cockroach. IMO the printing font is taking away from the logo. Keep it simple and appropriate for the mark. Also decide what this logo is for and flush out the concept. funny I just read QuantumCMG's comments.

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QuantumCMG
Aug 14, 2009 00:18

This reminds me of two things: a mini rubix cube and a cricket. I'd nail the concept you want, then deliver it visually. I'd bold the type or make it more marker-felt / hand written style.

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jennyb
Jul 27, 2009 23:43

This one is quite unique...has lots of potential, a very abstract question mark, nice! One thing to keep in mind is the mark and the type need to match up...if you have a mark with very sharp and crisp lines, then your type should also carry those same crisp lines; same goes for when you have soft round edges, you want to pair it up with a complimentary type that's edges are nice and rounded, soft. Hope that helps, great job :)

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jrwahyu
Jul 27, 2009 23:30

Thanks jennyb
I'll do some revision for this concept.

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Comment No.
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jennyb
Jul 27, 2009 23:19

These are some really nice colors...I like the cube concept but not sure about the antenna coming up out of the top and what that has to do with fresh printing? Also, not sure if the type for "printing" fits with the mark very well. Try to find something that ties in with the mark :)

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