shortriver`s Logo Designs Comments


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sovisual
Feb 08, 2010 13:42

Too stylized for me. Other than it being olive colored the shape and the way the twig comes out of the fruit bares no relation to an actual olive twig.

It is a nice shape and typographical composition though.

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shortriver
Feb 06, 2010 05:03

Thanks for adding it to the Favourites! :D

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McGuireDesign
Feb 05, 2010 11:16

**Added to Brandstack Favs Gallery! Congrats and keep up the great work**

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Jeiji
Jan 30, 2010 16:36

Awesome, but yeah, might wanna' disconnect the tree.

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TabithaKristen
Jan 26, 2010 06:51

I love the artistic quality here. It's a wonderful start. The mockup looks great and I agree with every comment above. :)

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designabot
Jan 24, 2010 16:08

this looks great but I totally agree with the above comment. Good luck

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idastudios
Jan 19, 2010 10:34

i like the feel of this. bring the scale down a bit. You dont need to connect the tree to the type. makes it too much and drop the tag line. No need for it and it doesnt sit well.

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tanami
Jan 19, 2010 10:25

It looks really nice on the box in the mock-up picture.

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idavid
Jan 18, 2010 17:55

I guess you need to diversify your variations other than the changes in colour. Brandstack disapprove logos not on the design itself but other subtle technicalities in the upload process. I learnt the hard way(probably still am).Great work anyway-imaginative.

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shortriver
Jan 18, 2010 16:33

Thank you for the springs! I'm glad to see you like the logo!

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shortriver
Jan 16, 2010 06:02

Thank you for your comment!
You mean like in the one-color/stamp version?
I considered it as well, but I think the red "wine filling" adds a nice colorful touch and makes clear where the red ink color comes from.

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McGuireDesign
Jan 13, 2010 07:04

What if you just had the space in the pen as the negative space of a glass only?

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