shortriver`s Comments


Comment No.
37

shortriver
Feb 08, 2010 14:37

Thank you for following me and the comment on OliveTwig.

The Logo was thought to be stylized and you are right: a more realistic approach on the twig would have made it look different. But the focus lies indeed on the typographical composition and to keep it simple yet recognizeable.

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Comment No.
36

shortriver
Feb 08, 2010 14:36

Try to use a more loosely drawn font that fits with the stroke of the mark. This one looks too solid.

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Comment No.
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shortriver
Feb 06, 2010 05:55

Thank you very much for the spring on OliveTwig!

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shortriver
Feb 06, 2010 05:52

Thanks a lot for the spring on WineScript!

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shortriver
Feb 06, 2010 05:42

Thanks a lot for the Fav on OliveTwig! Very much appreciated!

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shortriver
Feb 06, 2010 05:41

Thank you for the fav on OliveTwig!

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shortriver
Feb 06, 2010 05:40

Thanks for the Fav!

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shortriver
Feb 06, 2010 05:37

Thank you for the spring on OliveTwig!

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shortriver
Feb 06, 2010 05:35

As stated above, change the type to a clear sans serif that fits with the cube.
Include a cube without the gradients, a gray version and try a black & white version as well.
The cube is really good though!

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Comment No.
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shortriver
Feb 06, 2010 05:28

This is really nice! Would like it even better if his feet were hanging a bit more loosely in the air since he is floating. But good work nonetheless.

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shortriver
Feb 06, 2010 05:25

Thank you for the spring on OliveTwig!

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shortriver
Feb 06, 2010 05:21

Thank you for following! You have some nice pieces in your portfolio!

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shortriver
Feb 06, 2010 05:20

Thank you for the spring on OliveTwig!

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shortriver
Feb 06, 2010 05:15

Thank you for the springs! Very much appreciated!

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shortriver
Feb 06, 2010 05:11

Thank you for following, the Fav on WineScript and the spring on OliveTwig! You've got a really great and inspiring portfolio!

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shortriver
Feb 06, 2010 05:03

Thanks for adding it to the Favourites! :D

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Comment No.
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shortriver
Feb 03, 2010 17:52

Thanks a lot for the spring! :)

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shortriver
Feb 03, 2010 17:51

Thanks a lot for the spring!

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shortriver
Feb 03, 2010 17:45

Thank you for the spring! You've got a nice and inspiring portfolio!

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shortriver
Feb 03, 2010 17:40

Thanks a lot for the spring!

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shortriver
Feb 01, 2010 18:50

This looks really nice, especially the orange version on the dark background! Good luck with selling it!

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shortriver
Jan 31, 2010 10:24

Thank you for following! I Really like your ecostaar logo!

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shortriver
Jan 31, 2010 06:18

Thank you for the comment and the springs!

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shortriver
Jan 31, 2010 06:16

Thank you for the springs and the favorite! :)

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shortriver
Jan 31, 2010 06:11

Thanks you very much for your comment, spring and favorite on my logo! I appreciate it a lot and am working on the changes. You got a pretty awesome collections of logs btw. Viewing your gallery is definitely a motivation for me.

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shortriver
Jan 31, 2010 06:02

Thanks a lot for the springs and your comment on my logo! I'm working on it and will definitely consider the hints you told me.

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shortriver
Jan 31, 2010 05:59

Thanks a lot for all the springs and the favorites!

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shortriver
Jan 23, 2010 07:24

Thank you for the spring!

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shortriver
Jan 23, 2010 07:24

Thank you for the spring!

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shortriver
Jan 23, 2010 07:20

Thank you for your constructive critique! :)

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