I love the design...perfect font. Very lyrical.
I would just say... you may not be doing the mark justice by not showing some color and not being more descriptive in your description.
Many thanks for your springs. Apa Kabar, teri makasi. I see many talented people from your area and India. I'm American & my wife is Chinese, born in Aceh and later went to Jakarta. I lived in Jakarta for a year. Let's see more from you.
Love the simple idea...my mother's favorite colour. I might make the eyes bigger with appropriate spacing. I think the eyes would get lost at a reduced business card size.
Thanks August for noticing my work!
Alan